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My teardrops outpace my glances

ุฏู…ูˆุน ุนูŠู†ูŠ ุชุณุจู‚ ุงู„ุทุฑูุง

1. My teardrops outpace my glances
I struggle to hide them but they wonโ€™t hide

ูก. ุฏูู…ูˆุนู ุนูŽูŠู†ูŠ ุชูŽุณุจูู‚ู ุงู„ุทูŽุฑูุง
ุฃูŽุฌู‡ูŽุฏู ุฃูŽู† ุชูŽุฎูู‰ ููŽู…ุง ุชูŽุฎูู‰

2. And why would they hide when passion dwells
In one whom time has left no respite

ูข. ูˆูŽูƒูŽูŠููŽ ูŠูŽุฎูู‰ ูˆูŽุฌุฏู ุฐูŠ ุตูŽุจูˆูŽุฉู
ู„ูŽู… ูŠูŽุชุฑููƒู ุงู„ุฏูŽู‡ุฑู ู„ูŽู‡ู ุฅูู„ูุง