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His condition changed from the love I knew,

حال عما عهدته من ودادي

1. His condition changed from the love I knew,
And he transgressed in parting and avoiding me.

١. حَالَ عمَّا عهدتُه مِن ودادِي
واعتَدَى في قَطيعتي وبِعَادِي

2. He asked me how a body wearied and distressed,
Can survive without a heart.

٢. وسَلاني وقال كم جُهْدُ ما يَب
قى بِجِسمٍ مُضنىً بغير فُؤادِ

3. He obeyed the slanderers about me, yet how strange
That the beloved should heed the words of enemies.

٣. وأطاعَ الوُشاةَ فِيَّ وصعبٌ
أن يُطيعَ الحبيبُ قولَ الأعادِي

4. He is the lover of my eyes and heart, though now
Estrangement has replaced affection.

٤. وَهو من نَاظِري وقَلبي وإن مَل
لَ وأبدَى القِلَى مكانُ السّوادِ