أبتshe refused الوداعfarewell فبكرتso she set out early برحيلto depart
أبت الوداع فبكرت برحيل
أجنايةa crime? أمor أتعمتshe bestowed (text unclear) بجميلwith a kindness
أجناية أم أتعمت بجميل
She refused farewell and set out early on her journey.
She refused farewell, so she departed early.
Was that a crime—or a kindness brought to completion?
Was it a crime, or did she bestow a kindness?
عهديmy knowledge بسالبةof the woman who steals الفؤادthe heart شريكتيmy partner
عهدي بسالبة الفؤاد شريكتي
فيin الحبlove لاnot توليshe bestows الغرامpassion بديليmy replacement
في الحب لا تولي الغرام بديلي
I knew the thief of my heart as my partner
As I know her, my heart's captor is my partner
in love, never giving passion any substitute.
in love; she gives no passion to another in my place.
خشيتshe feared تصدعthe shattering of بالوداعat farewell جوانحيmy ribs
خشيت تصدع بالوداع جوانحي
فغدتso she set about تحثurging on السيرthe journey قبلbefore عويليmy wailing
فغدت تحث السير قبل عويلي
She feared that farewell would split my ribs apart,
She feared farewell would shatter my ribs,
so she left, urging the journey on before my wailing.
so she set about urging haste before my wailing.
رحلواthey departed بهاwith her ولوand if استشيرتshe was consulted ماnot مضتshe went
رحلوا بها ولو استشيرت ما مضت
معهمwith them ولاnor رضيتshe consented لهمfor them بقفولto returning
معهم ولا رضيت لهم بقفول
They departed with her; had she been consulted, she would not have gone
They departed with her; had she been consulted, she would not have gone
with them, nor would she have consented to their return.
with them, nor consented to their return.
رضختshe yielded لأحكامto the decrees of الزمانtime فأظهرتso she displayed
رضخت لأحكام الزمان فأظهرت
جلداfortitude يحطmakes light بقالهمof their talk والقيلand gossip
جلدا يحط بقالهم والقيل
I bowed to time’s decrees, displaying
She yielded to the decrees of time, and showed
a fortitude proof against all their talk and gossip.
fortitude that makes light of their talk and gossip.
حبa love شريفnoble لاnot يدنسis sullied عرضناour honor
حب شريف لا يدنس عرضنا
فيهin it ولاnor نخشىwe fear ملامthe reproach of عذولa faultfinder
فيه ولا نخشى ملام عذول
A noble love that never sullies our honor;
A noble love: our honor is not sullied
within it we fear no reproachful censor’s blame.
in it, nor do we fear a faultfinder's reproach.
وإذاand when الصبابةardent yearning أنشبتsank in أظفارهاits claws
وإذا الصبابة أنشبت أظفارها
ألقlay down السلاحarms لسيفهاbefore its sword المصقولpolished
ألق السلاح لسيفها المصقول
But when passion sinks its claws into you,
And when ardent yearning sinks its claws,
lay down your arms before its burnished sword.
lay down your arms before its polished sword.
عبثاin vain تحاولyou try أنto تحولchange وجهةthe course
عبثا تحاول أن تحول وجهة
بسوىtoward anyone other than المحبthe beloved لقلبكfor your heart المشغولengrossed
بسوى المحب لقلبك المشغول
In vain you try to turn the course
In vain you try to change the course
of your preoccupied heart toward anyone but the beloved.
of your engrossed heart toward anyone but the beloved.
أواهalas منat مضضthe anguish of الفراقparting وحرهand its heat
أواه من مضض الفراق وحره
ومنand at الوقوفstanding بدمنةby a deserted campsite's traces وطلولand ruins
ومن الوقوف بدمنة وطلول
Ah, the bitter anguish of parting and its fire,
Alas for the anguish of parting and its heat,
and standing before a campsite’s remains and ruins!
and for standing by a deserted campsite's traces and ruins!
ويلاهwoe is me كمhow many طللa ruined dwelling علىalong جنباتهits sides
ويلاه كم طلل على جنباته
ذهبتwas lost حياةthe life of معذبa tormented one معلولailing
ذهبت حياة معذب معلول
Alas, how many a ruin, along whose sides,
Woe is me! How many a ruin, beside which
has the life of a tormented, ailing lover passed away!
a tormented, ailing man's life was lost!
تتمزقare torn الأحشاthe entrails حيالbefore رسومهits traces
تتمزق الأحشا حيال رسومه
يتلهفhe laments وتشوقand longing وذهولand bewilderment
يتلهف وتشوق وذهول
His innards tear apart before its lingering traces;
The entrails are torn before its traces;
he laments, yearns, and reels in terror.
he laments, amid longing and bewilderment.
فنبثهso we confide to it الشوقlonging المبرحagonizing علهperhaps he
فنبثه الشوق المبرح عله
يجدmay find المشوقthe yearning lover بهthrough it شفاءa cure غليلburning thirst
يجد المشوق به شفاء غليل
So we pour out to it our tormenting longing, in hopes
So we confide to it our agonizing longing; perhaps
that the yearning lover may find in it relief for his burning thirst.
the yearning lover may find through it a cure for his burning thirst.
هذاthis الغرامlove وهذهand these حالاتهits states
هذا الغرام وهذه حالاته
والناسand people بينbetween منغصan embittered one وقتيلand one slain
والناس بين منغص وقتيل
Such is passion, and such are its states:
This is love, and these are its states,
among people, some are tormented and some are slain.
and people are either embittered or slain.
بيناwhile الفتىthe young man فيin حظوةfavor وملذةand delight
بينا الفتى في حظوة وملذة
فإذاand suddenly بهthere he is فيin شقوةmisery وحؤولand changed fortunes
فإذا به في شقوة وحؤول
One moment a young man enjoys favor and delight;
While the youth enjoys favor and delight,
the next, there he is in misery and reversal.
then suddenly he suffers misery and reversals of fortune.
كانتshe was وكانand was الموقتthe time صفواserene بينناbetween us
كانت وكان الموقت صفوا بيننا
ومشتand she went away فأبقتso she left behind ليfor me شعارan inner garment of نحولwasting
ومشت فأبقت لي شعار نحول
She was there, and time between us was serene;
She was here, and our time together was serene;
then she went, leaving wasting as my close-worn garment.
and she went away, leaving me the garb of wasting.
تركتshe left عيوناeyes لاnot يكفكفis held back دمعهاtheir tears
تركت عيونا لا يكفكف دمعها
فوقover الخدودthe cheeks يفيضflows فيضthe flooding of سيولtorrents
فوق الخدود يفيض فيض سيول
She left behind eyes whose tears cannot be stanched,
She left eyes whose tears cannot be held back,
streaming over the cheeks in torrents.
pouring over the cheeks like flooding torrents.
منwho مخبريone who tells me هلdid ساقطتshe shed عبراتهاher tears
من مخبري هل ساقطت عبراتها
يومon the day of الرحيلdeparture علىover فراقparting from خليلa dear companion
يوم الرحيل على فراق خليل
Who will tell me whether she shed her tears
Who will tell me: did she shed her tears
on departure day, at parting from a beloved?
on the day of departure, over parting from a dear companion?
عهديmy knowledge بهاof her ذاتpossessing انعطافtenderness فيin الهوىlove
عهدي بها ذات انعطاف في الهوى
سلكتshe followed ولاand no تثريبblame فيهin it سبيليmy path
سلكت ولا تثريب فيه سبيلي
I knew her as tenderly inclined in love,
I have known her to be tender in love;
following my path—a path beyond reproach.
she followed my path, with no blame in it.
لولاbut for الدلالcoquetry وحبهاand her love العذريchaste ماnot
لولا الدلال وحبها العذري ما
كنتI would have been الغرورthe deceived one (contextual reading) بوعدهاby her promise الممطولlong deferred
كنت الغرور بوعدها الممطول
Were it not for her coyness and her chaste, ʿUdhrī love, I would not
But for coquetry and her chaste love, I would not
have been the guileless dupe of her ever-deferred promise.
have been deceived by her long-deferred promise.
ماwhat ضرهاwould have harmed her لوif ودعتنيshe had bid me farewell إنماbut in fact
ما ضرها لو ودعتني إنما
أبتshe refused الوداعfarewell فبكرتso she set out early برحيلto depart
أبت الوداع فبكرت برحيل
What would it have cost her to bid me farewell? Yet—
What harm would it have done her to bid me farewell? Yet
She refused farewell and set out early on her journey.
She refused farewell, so she departed early.