بَكَتwept رَحمَةًout of pity لِلصَّبِّfor the lovesick man عَينُthe eye عَدُوِّهِof his enemy
بَكَت رَحمَةً لِلصَّبِّ عَينُ عَدُوِّهِ
فَماso what is wrong لِحَبيبِwith the beloved of القَلبِthe heart لاnot يَرحَمُhe pities الصَبّاthe lovesick man
فَما لِحَبيبِ القَلبِ لا يَرحَمُ الصَبّا
His enemy’s eye wept out of pity for the lovesick man—
His enemy’s eye wept in pity for the lovesick man;
The enemy's eye wept with pity for youth
The enemy’s eye wept in mercy for the lovesick one, yet why does the heart’s beloved show no pity for the yearning lover?
what ails the heart’s beloved, that he shows the lover no mercy?
so why does the heart’s beloved not pity the lovesick man?
So why does the heart's beloved not have mercy on youth?
He is too stingy to let the slain victim live by a mere glance, or let the parched soul drink from his sweet, cool waters.
بَخيلٌmiserly بِأَنin letting يَحياlive القَتيلُthe slain man بِلَحظِهِthrough his glance
بَخيلٌ بِأَن يَحيا القَتيلُ بِلَحظِهِ
وَأَنand that يَرِدَcome to drink الظَمآنُthe thirsty man بارِدَهُhis cool water العَذباthe sweet
وَأَن يَرِدَ الظَمآنُ بارِدَهُ العَذبا
He begrudges the slain man life bestowed by his glance,
He begrudges the slain man life through his glance,
Stingy that the slain should live by his glance
He is distant though our dwellings are near; how long will he mingle nearness with estrangement for me?
and the thirsty man a draught of his cool, sweet water.
and the thirsty man a drink of his cool, sweet water.
And the thirsty gain cool, sweet water
I sacrifice my soul for a beloved who betrayed me, yet I loved him; he grew in aversion, and my heart grew in love for him.
بَعيدٌdistant عَلىdespite أَنَّthe fact that الدِيارthe dwellings قَريبَةٌnear
بَعيدٌ عَلى أَنَّ الدِيار قَريبَةٌ
فَحَتّىso until مَتىwhen بِالبُعدِwith distance يمزجُhe mingles ليfor me القُرباnearness
فَحَتّى مَتى بِالبُعدِ يمزجُ لي القُربا
He remains distant, though the dwellings are near;
He is distant, though the dwellings are near;
It seems too far that the abodes are near
I offered him my guarded affection and my tears, yet he was not content until I gifted him my heart.
how long will he mingle nearness for me with distance?
how long, then, will he mingle nearness with distance for me?
So for how long with remoteness does he mix nearness for me?
He appeared to me, so I said, 'Return it!' He replied, 'I possess it now; and had you not gifted it, I would have seized it by force.'
بِنَفسيwith my life as ransom حَبيباًa beloved خانَنيbetrayed me فَهَويتُهُyet I loved him
بِنَفسي حَبيباً خانَني فَهَويتُهُ
فَزادَso he grew قلىًin aversion فَاِزدادَand grew قَلبيmy heart لَهُfor him حُبّاin love
فَزادَ قلىً فَاِزدادَ قَلبي لَهُ حُبّا
My life be ransom for a beloved who betrayed me, yet whom I loved;
My life for a beloved who betrayed me, yet I loved him!
With myself I loved a lover who betrayed me and I adored him
With two enchanting eyes like Harut’s magic, as if he unsheathes from them a sharp, severing sword against me.
his aversion grew, and my heart grew still more in love with him.
His aversion grew, and my heart grew in love for him.
So my heart's torment increased and its love for him grew
The love of that naive gazelle has worn me down and led me in submission—for how often has love tamed the wild, stubborn beast?
بَذَلتُI offered لَهُto him الوُدَّlove المَصونُclosely guarded وَأَدمُعيand my tears
بَذَلتُ لَهُ الوُدَّ المَصونُ وَأَدمُعي
فَلَمbut did not يَقتَنِعbe content حَتّىuntil وَهَبتُI gave لَهُto him القَلباthe heart
فَلَم يَقتَنِع حَتّى وَهَبتُ لَهُ القَلبا
I offered him my carefully guarded affection and my tears,
I offered him my closely guarded love and my tears,
I gave him my hidden love and my tears
I drenched my robe with tears, though truly such weeping only heaps anguish upon the weeper's anguish.
but he was not content until I gave him my heart.
but he was not content until I gave him my heart.
Yet he was not content until I gave him my heart
I sent my messenger, and the phantom that travels by night, to you along with my tears and the drifting breeze.
بَداit occurred ليto me فَقُلتُso I said اِردُدهُreturn it قالَhe said مَلَكتُهُI own it
بَدا لي فَقُلتُ اِردُدهُ قالَ مَلَكتُهُ
وَلَوand even if لَمnot تَهَبهُyou had given it ليto me تَمَلَّكتُهُI would have seized it غَصباby force
وَلَو لَم تَهَبهُ لي تَمَلَّكتُهُ غَصبا
He appeared to me; I said, “Give it back.” He said, “It is mine.
I had second thoughts and said, “Return it.” He said, “I own it;
It appeared to me so I said "Give it back!" He said "I own it
Even had you not given it to me, I would have seized it by force”—
and even had you not given it to me, I would have seized it by force.”
And had you not gifted it to me I would have seized it by force"
بِعَينَينِwith two eyes هاروتيَّتَينِHarut-like كأَنَّماas though
بِعَينَينِ هاروتيَّتَينِ كأَنَّما
يُجَرِّدُhe unsheathes نَحويtoward me مِنهُماfrom them both صارِماًa sword عَضباkeen-edged
يُجَرِّدُ نَحوي مِنهُما صارِماً عَضبا
with two Hārūt-like, bewitching eyes, as though
With two eyes like Harut’s, he seems
With two Harut-like eyes as if
he were drawing from them against me a keen-edged sword.
to unsheathe from them a keen-edged sword against me.
He unsheathes a severe sword toward me from them
بَرانيwore me away هَوىlove for الظَبيِthe gazelle الغَريرِguileless وَقادَنيand led me
بَراني هَوى الظَبيِ الغَريرِ وَقادَني
ذَليلاًhumbled وَكَمand how many راضَhas tamed الهَوىlove جامِحاًan unruly one صَعباhard to tame
ذَليلاً وَكَم راضَ الهَوى جامِحاً صَعبا
Love for that guileless gazelle has worn me thin and led me on,
Love for the guileless gazelle has worn me away and led me
He showed me the folly of the beguiling gazelle and led me
abased—how many a wild, ungovernable spirit love has tamed!
humbled—and how many a wild, unyielding one has love tamed!
Humiliated, and how the passion made its course difficult!
بَلَلتُI drenched رِدائيmy cloak بِالدُموعِwith tears وَإِنَّماyet only
بَلَلتُ رِدائي بِالدُموعِ وَإِنَّما
يُزادُis given more بِهاby them الباكيthe weeper عَلىon top of كَربِهِhis anguish كَرباanguish
يُزادُ بِها الباكي عَلى كَربِهِ كَربا
I soaked my cloak with tears, although
I drenched my cloak in tears, yet they only
I soaked my robe with tears, and yet
tears only add anguish upon anguish to the one who weeps.
add anguish to the weeper’s anguish.
The weeping one is increased by them in hardship upon hardship
بَعَثتُI sent رَسوليmy messenger والخَيالand the phantom الَّذيthat سَرىjourneyed by night
بَعَثتُ رَسولي والخَيال الَّذي سَرى
إِلَيكَto you بِدَمعيwith my tears وَالنَسيمُand the breeze الَّذيthat هَبّاblew
إِلَيكَ بِدَمعي وَالنَسيمُ الَّذي هَبّا
I sent my messenger, and the phantom that journeyed by night
I sent my messenger and the phantom that journeyed by night
I sent my messenger - the imagination that traveled
to you, accompanied by my tears and the breeze that blew.
to you with my tears, and the breeze that blew.
To you - with my tear and the breeze that blew
Partial English translation: 10 of 20 Arabic lines translated.