أباO Abu (father of) عليٍّAli طلبتُI sought عيبكyour fault ماas far as اسcould (first part)
أبا عليٍّ طلبتُ عيبك ما اس
طعتI could (completion) فألفيتand I found عيبكyour fault السرفاextravagance
طعت فألفيت عيبك السرفا
Abu Ali, I sought your fault as far as I
O Abu Ali, I sought your faults but could not find,
Could, and found your fault to be extravagance.
Your fault is lavishness, like the fragrance of musk when inhaled spreads delight,
وذاكand that عيبa fault كأنهas though it were ذَفَرُpungent fragrance of الthe
وذاك عيب كأنه ذَفَرُ ال
مسكmusk إذاwhen شمis smelled نشرهits wafting scent رُشِفاis sipped
مسك إذا شم نشره رُشِفا
And that is a fault like the pungent fragrance of
Or like rain clouds whenever a seeker hopes to curb it, it pours down in plenty,
Musk, whose wafting scent, once smelled, is sipped.
How excellent that a young man's fault be one which when mentioned ignites passion,
أوor ديمةsteady rainfall الغيثrain كلماwhenever طمعhoped الthe
أو ديمة الغيث كلما طمع ال
طامعhopeful person فيfor أنthat يكفَّهاhe might stop it وكفاit poured down
طامع في أن يكفَّها وكفا
Or steady rain: whenever the
And not, my brother, did I seek your faults out of hatred or spite,
Hopeful hope to stop it, it pours down.
But out of care for a soul full of love that never wavered in affection for you,
وحبذاand how fine أنthat يكونshould be عيبthe fault of فتىa young man
وحبذا أن يكون عيب فتى
عيباًa fault إذاwhen مرpassed ذكرهits mention شغفاcaptivated
عيباً إذا مر ذكره شغفا
How fine for a young man's fault to be
I saw some faults that pricked me, which if a critic saw would yearn,
A fault whose passing mention captures the heart!
And become, due to missing you, full of regret, and from seeing fortune slip by, sorrowful,
ولمand not يكنbe ياO أخاbrother of العلاhigh honor طلبيmy seeking
ولم يكن يا أخا العلا طلبي
عيبكyour fault لاneither بغضةhatred ولاnor شنفاhostility
عيبك لا بغضة ولا شنفا
Nor, O brother of high honor, was my search
And I feared that an evil eye would strike you with harm,
For your fault prompted by hatred or hostility.
So I attributed a fault to you that would serve as protection, but found no ready alliance,
لكنbut لإشفاقfrom the concern of نفسthe soul of ذيone possessing مقةaffection
لكن لإشفاق نفس ذي مقة
ماnot زالdeparted عنfrom ودكمlove for you ولاnor انحرفاturned away
ما زال عن ودكم ولا انحرفا
But by the concern of a loving man's soul—
For I said “By God, nothing protects a man if the Glorious One forgives and the Forgiver absolves,”
One who never abandoned affection for you or turned aside.
God was with him wherever he was and His care surrounded him always,
أبصرI see أشياءthings فيكin you منفسةًprecious
أبصر أشياء فيك منفسةً
إذاwhen رآهاhe sees them مذمَّمٌa despised man لهفاhe grieves
إذا رآها مذمَّمٌ لهفا
I see in you qualities so precious
I was truthful in what I truthfully sought of faults in you without malice or dishonesty,
That a despised man laments when he sees them.
O you of beautiful face, traits, character and mind however it turns,
يصبحbecomes منwhoever أخطأتهthey passed him by ذاpossessed of أسفٍsorrow
يصبح من أخطأته ذا أسفٍ
ومنand whoever رأىsaw الحظgood fortune فائتاًslipping away أسفاgrieved
ومن رأى الحظ فائتاً أسفا
Those whom they pass by are left sorrowful;
O you whom if I praise to an enemy he admits and acknowledges,
Whoever sees good fortune slipping away grieves.
I have an ailing loved one I want to return your favor with fine fragrance whenever he is weak,
وإننيand I خفتfeared أنthat تصيبكmight strike you بالwith the
وإنني خفت أن تصيبك بال
عينevil eye عيونٌeyes تقرطسhit squarely الهدفاthe target
عين عيونٌ تقرطس الهدفا
And I feared you might be struck by the
So send him some incense like some of your previous kindnesses,
Evil eye, by eyes that hit their target squarely.
And let your breaths match the memory of you, and your perfume suffices me,
فارتدتso I sought عيباًa fault يكونwould be واقيةa shield
فارتدت عيباً يكون واقية
فلمbut did not أجدهI find it أليةًa solemn oath حلفاswearing
فلم أجده أليةً حلفا
So I sought a fault to serve as a shield,
From your generous and distinguished aloes wood that when described excels over all others,
But found none—I swear a solemn oath.
That which if the morning breeze of the meadows competed with it would not equal it,
فقلتso I said فيin اللهGod ماthat which وقىprotects رجلاًa man
فقلت في الله ما وقى رجلاً
إنif ميحhe was asked for bounty أعفىhe gave abundantly وإنand if أريبhe was given cause for suspicion عفاhe forgave
إن ميح أعفى وإن أريب عفا
So I said: “In God lies protection for a man
Let it not be the smoke of amber for the jinni when inhaled causes dismay,
Who gives freely when asked, and pardons when given cause for suspicion.
Do not mix aloofness into gentleness for sometimes the gentlest turns cold,
كانmay be لهfor him اللهGod حيثwherever كانhe is ولاand may not
كان له الله حيث كان ولا
زالتcease to be يميناهHis two right hands حولهaround him كنفاa shelter
زالت يميناه حوله كنفا
May God be with him wherever he is, and may
Far be it from you, in my affection for you, O kindest of all people in kindness,
His two right hands remain a shelter around him.”
Give the best and most for when you give the best my share in it is an honor,
صدقتُI spoke truth فيماin what صدقتyou believed منof طلبيmy seeking
صدقتُ فيما صدقت من طلبي
فيكin you معاباa fault ولمand did not أزدI add ألفاan alif (one letter)
فيك معابا ولم أزد ألفا
I spoke truth in what you believed of my search
And abundant foul water does not quench thirst, but what is good and pure does to the taster,
For a fault in you; I added not even an alif.
Truly, plentiful rotten is intrusive to the eye and heart and causes dislike,
ياO حسنbeautiful in الوجهthe face والشمائلand bearing والand the
يا حسن الوجه والشمائل وال
أخلاقcharacter والعقلand intellect كيفماhowever انصرفاit turned
أخلاق والعقل كيفما انصرفا
O you of beautiful face, bearing, and
And do not blame me for my persistence in judgment or in asking for luxury,
Character and mind, whatever course it takes!
Whoever God beautified his face, traits and gave him refinement was obliged refinement,
ياO منyou who إذاwhen قلتI spoke فيهabout him صالحةsomething good
يا من إذا قلت فيه صالحة
عندbefore عدوٍّan enemy أقرَّhe assented واعترفاand acknowledged it
عند عدوٍّ أقرَّ واعترفا
O you of whom, when I speak something good
Your beautiful face drew me to you until I asked you for gifts,
Before an enemy, he assents and acknowledges it.
And we deem it enough that every generous person, when virtues mount, takes them up.
عنديI have عليلa sick man أردُّI restore منَّتَهُhis strength
عندي عليل أردُّ منَّتَهُ
بطيّبwith fine الطيبperfume كلماwhenever ضعفاhe weakened
بطيّب الطيب كلما ضعفا
I have a sick man whose strength I restore
O jewel of the necklace, I have thoughts that crack open the oyster shell of your praise,
With fine perfume whenever he weakens.
So allow me to thank you and you will find my gratitude then copious and more to come,
فابعثso send بشيءsomething منof البخورincense لهto him
فابعث بشيء من البخور له
كبعضlike some of معروفكyour kindness الذيwhich سلفاcame before
كبعض معروفك الذي سلفا
So send him some incense,
Like some of the kindness you have shown before.
ولتكand let be أنفاسهits breaths تشاكلresemble ذكremembrance (first part)
ولتك أنفاسه تشاكل ذك
راكyour remembrance (completion) وحسبيand enough for me بطيبهاis their sweetness وكفىand that suffices
راك وحسبي بطيبها وكفى
And let its breaths resemble the remembrance
Of you; their sweetness is enough for me, enough.
منfrom نَدِّكyour nadd incense الفاخرsplendid المُفضَّلpreferred فيamong الthe
من نَدِّك الفاخر المُفضَّل في ال
ندِّnadd incense علىabove غيرهothers besides it إذاwhen وُصِفاit is described
ندِّ على غيره إذا وُصِفا
From your splendid nadd incense, prized among the
Nadd varieties above all others whenever described.
ذاكthat الذيwhich لوif غداwere to start يفاخرهvying with it in excellence
ذاك الذي لو غدا يفاخره
نسيمa breeze نَورِblossoms of الرياضgardens ماnot انتصفاheld its own
نسيم نَورِ الرياض ما انتصفا
That incense: were it challenged
By a breeze from garden blossoms, the breeze could not hold its own.
ولاand let not يكنit be دُخنَةَthe fumigation of المُعَزِّمthe exorcist للfor the
ولا يكن دُخنَةَ المُعَزِّم لل
عفريتifrit (demon) منwhoever شمsmelled نشرهاits wafting scent رعفاhad a nosebleed
عفريت من شم نشرها رعفا
Nor let it be the exorcist's fumigation for the
Ifrit: whoever smells its fumes gets a nosebleed.
لاdo not تدخلنever introduce الجفاءharshness فيinto لطفٍkindness
لا تدخلن الجفاء في لطفٍ
فربماfor sometimes ألطفshowed kindness امرؤa man فجفاyet gave offense
فربما ألطف امرؤ فجفا
Do not mingle harshness with kindness,
For sometimes a man offers kindness, yet offends.
حاشاكfar be it from you منfrom ذاكthat فيin ملاطفتيtreating me kindly
حاشاك من ذاك في ملاطفتي
ياO ألطفkindest of الناسpeople كلهمall of them لطفاin kindness
يا ألطف الناس كلهم لطفا
Far be that from you in your kindness to me,
O kindest of all people in kindness!
أطبgive good quality وأقللand give little فإنfor if أطبتyou give good quality وأكand increase (first part)
أطب وأقلل فإن أطبت وأك
ثرتyou increase (completion) نصيبيmy share فياthen oh لهfor it شرفاan honor
ثرت نصيبي فيا له شرفا
Give fine incense, and little; but if you give fine incense and
Increase my share, what an honor that would be!
وليسand it is not يرويquenches thirst كثيرmuch مائكof your water بلbut
وليس يروي كثير مائك بل
ماwhat طابis pleasant منهof it لشاربto a drinker وصفاand is clear
ما طاب منه لشارب وصفا
It is not much water from you that quenches thirst, but
What is sweet to the drinker and clear.
إنindeed الكثيرa large amount الخبيثfoul مقتحمis despised
إن الكثير الخبيث مقتحم
فيin العينthe eye والقلبand the heart يبعثarouses الأنفاdisgust
في العين والقلب يبعث الأنفا
An abundance of foul stuff is despised
By eye and heart, and arouses disgust.
ولاand do not تلمنيblame me علىfor اشتطاطيmy overstepping فيin الthe
ولا تلمني على اشتطاطي في ال
حكمjudgment ولاnor فيfor سؤالكasking you الترفاluxury
حكم ولا في سؤالك الترفا
Do not blame me for overstepping in
Judgment, or for asking you for luxury.
منwhoever حسنmade beautiful اللهGod وجهَهُhis face وسجاand traits (first part)
من حسن الله وجهَهُ وسجا
ياهhis traits (completion) وأعطاهand endowed him كُلِّفwas burdened with الكلفاduties
ياه وأعطاه كُلِّف الكلفا
He whose face God has made fair, along with his
Character, and whom He has endowed, is burdened with duties.
وجهكyour face ذاكthat الجميلbeautiful سحَّبنيemboldened me
وجهك ذاك الجميل سحَّبني
عليكtoward you حتىuntil سألتكI asked you for التحفاchoice gifts
عليك حتى سألتك التحفا
That beautiful face of yours emboldened me
To presume upon you, until I asked you for choice gifts.
وحسبناand enough for us أنthat كلevery ذيpossessor of كرمٍgenerosity
وحسبنا أن كل ذي كرمٍ
إذاwhenever ركبتyou mounted المكارمnoble deeds ارتدفاrode behind you
إذا ركبت المكارم ارتدفا
And it is enough for us that every generous man,
Whenever you mount noble deeds, rides behind you.
ياO درةpearl of العقدthe necklace إنindeed ليI have فِكَراًthoughts
يا درة العقد إن لي فِكَراً
تفلقsplit open عنto reveal درpearls of مدحكpraise for you الصدفاthe shells
تفلق عن در مدحك الصدفا
O pearl of the necklace, I have thoughts
That split shells to reveal pearls of praise for you.
فاسعso strive لشكريfor my thanks تجدهyou will find it حينئذthen
فاسع لشكري تجده حينئذ
شكرthe thanks of قديرa capable man تعجَّلhastens الخلفاrecompense
شكر قدير تعجَّل الخلفا
So strive to earn my thanks: you will then find them
The thanks of a capable man who hastens recompense.
Partial English translation: 32 of 64 Arabic lines translated.